Wow, realy love this, amazing job!!! The contrast between light and dark is outstanding. I feel in this drawing that this man has gone trough a lot in his life. In the left eye I feel power, his strength to overcome the hard and dificult times and in the left I feel a lot of sadness. And the only little thing that disturbes me a little bit is the hard line in the corner of his right eye and the big one above his right eye. They take a little bit to much attention in my opinion. But that is just a little detail. My compliments with your first portret. I want to see more of your artwork. Keep up the outstanding work.
Thanks so much for taking the time to give detailed feedback, always love hearing things that could be improved. I'll take it into consideration when I update this portrait a bit, cause there is a few details I would like to change about it. But for now, it's time for the next portrait - too much staring at the same piece of work is never good for me. I appreciate the support, many more portraits are to come in the next month or two